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My Somebody
Contributed by
brittaney
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:52:47 PM in AEST
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Someone's out there for me,
Just don't know who.
I wish I could find out,
And know what to do.
Do I know him at all?
Did I pass him by?
Did I have a class with him?
Did I look in his eyes?
Does he love me now?
Do I know him at all?
When can I hold him?
When will he call?
Is it someone I love?
Is it someone I hate?
Is he a close friend?
Whens the first date?
I have no other choice,
But to move on for now.
I know I'll find him,
Someday... Somehow!
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brittaney
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Re: My Somebody
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by Unbreakable on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:57:33 PM AEST
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I like this poem..it's cute and straightforward. Good write..
Krystal |
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Re: My Somebody
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:01:23 PM AEST
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great poem. i like how it's straight out and to the point. and i know a lot of us can relate to this (me included). but like someone said- we can't force these things. and i really hate that he told the truth. lol. keep up the good work!!
~sprints
p.s. welcome you YPDC |
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Re: My Somebody
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:15:48 PM AEST
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there is a poem of mine you should read i wrote it to a friend of mine who was in need of a kind word or two and i think it applies i have the link to it below
yours is a great write
http://your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=92169 |
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Re: My Somebody
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by mylastwords on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:20:24 AM AEST
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I like this poem!!! It flows well, just a couple of spots where it doesn't!!! But I really like this. I used to relate to this poem, but when you stop looking for someone, they will come to you. When you least expect to find someone, you will find them!! It has happened like this many a time in my life. Sometimes it's bad timing coz when you stop wanting someone and get on with your life, someone comes!!! Well anyways, good luck!!!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: My Somebody
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:34:07 PM AEST
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| i love this poem. it sounds just like me keep writing. |
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