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Girls
Contributed by
brittaney
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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High Heals, ideal.
News real, for real!
Dry clean, prom queen.
Sixteen, sunscreen.
Beach bum, outcome,
Bubblegum, yum yum.
Talent scout, knockout.
Hang out, give a shout,
Sweet and sour, rush hour.
Wild flower, girl power!
Lookin' good, you should!
Sister hood? Misunderstood
Copyright ©
brittaney
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2005-06-05 19:42:55]
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Re: Girls
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:09:02 PM AEST
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| Aw, what an incredibly cute poem, it made me smile, it made my day. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Girls
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by Stellar on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:44:44 PM AEST
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Cute poem...it has good rhythym and it's upbeat.
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Re: Girls
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:37:10 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
huggs,
emy
welcome to the jungle. |
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Re: Girls
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by B-Rut on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:42:41 PM AEST
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Like they said...cute poem. Sometimes it didn't really say much during the poem, more like you were spitting out rhymes to make it longer, such as: beach bum, outcome...I dont understand the meaning of outcome. Maybe I just don't get what you trying to say, sorry if thats the case. Otherwise, definetly a good change of pace from the other dark and deep poems.
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Re: Girls
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by angel3000 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 05:52:47 PM AEST
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i really liked it it put a smile on my face
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