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Broke-Down Train
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 06:43:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Surrender your inhibitions and the voids that plague you
I see you have been beaten and there stands no one to help you up
It has become apparent that this broke-down train has stopped
And dropped me off
Creaking along the narrow roads, the Ferrari splits the red color of the autumn scenery
Blows a flat, the bullet still intact, while the passengers jump out of the hatch-back
Ejection seat, please, the train that slowed the force, made the casualties complete
Oh crap, here comes the last trap, the infamous plot, to get you back
Hold up there, pretty mouse, think about the sanctity of the holy house
Think about your future and why it never came,
There you go, as usual, thinking about yourself again
Riding the broke-down train...
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2005-06-05 18:43:40]
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Re: Broke-Down Train
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 06:44:53 PM AEST
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Re: Broke-Down Train
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:51:33 PM AEST
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i liked it a lot. keep up the good work. i like the riding the broke-down train part... i don't know why... i just do. keep up the good work!!
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