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The Rest Of My Days
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:00:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My love .. If all your endearing and charm
that I gaze on so fondly today
were to change by tomorrow
and flee from my arms
like fairy tales fading away,
you would still be adored ..
as this moment you are.
Let your youthfulness fade as it will;
I'd remiss all the ruin that rest in my heart
and love you eternaly still.
Its not that while beauty
and sweetness your own
or your eyes unabashed by a tear,
that desire and fate of my soul would be known ..
though one thing's perpetually clear:
The birth of our love
will eternaly shine
in all it's benevolent ways...
For I've loved you since
Heaven created the skies ..
and I shall for the rest of my days.
M.O.H.
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Man_On_High
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2005-06-05 16:00:36]
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:07:19 PM AEST
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Awww...what a beautiful, loving write. The last two stanzas made me swoon...lol Nicely done.
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by shelby on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:09:53 PM AEST
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this is lovely almost brought tears to my eyes
Michelle |
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:09:53 PM AEST
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| this is a BEAUTIFUL piece of writing, and the last two stanzas were absolutely breath taking!!! I don't usually go crazy for love poems, but this is absolutely amazing!!! You are SOOO talented!!!! WOW! I can't say anything other than this is BEAUTIFUL! |
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:25:31 PM AEST
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just beutiful!
i love the write
and i love the emotion
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by Masked_Man on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:49:32 PM AEST
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your girl is a lucky one , thats for sure
timeless love is rare
grab it and go
a legend in the making you are
MM
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:53:08 PM AEST
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This is a treasured love created in heaven and hopefully always cherished by both.
Rita |
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by nanb294eva on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:54:14 PM AEST
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Billy
that is so nice it really makes me want to grow old with you. I love you so much
love nancy |
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:49:51 AM AEST
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| wow beautiful........ |
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:40:54 AM AEST
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| A very tender and well put together poem!! i stand and applaud your way with words and look very forward to more!! thanks for sharing!!! dw |
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by brew on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:16:32 PM AEST
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Again what heart filled love.............Beautiful , and extradinary. WOW.........sums it up!
Brew~ |
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Re: The Rest Of My Days
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 11:40:57 PM AEST
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~*WK*~
How so romantically beautiful. Your words melt ones heart. Breath taking...
For I've loved you since
Heaven created the skies ..
and I shall for the rest of my days.
Your beautiful loving heart shines throughout this remarkable masterpiece. Eloquently penned by the master of true poetic verse.
I bow to ur excellence Billy~
love always ur fan/friend,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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