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Twisted is the ways
Contributed by
amph
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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tourment, rough, bent, tough. The sleeve can be simple but trouble is the cuff. Wrap and intraps the circulation of believing. Envy, problems, there all deceiving. Slip away from that grip that binds you, fall among the twisted ways that flow through you, and later revial, the glue you knew, once was there, now you learned to deal. Instill the thoughts and judgements that you thought, its time to live, this you almost forgot....
~Catch it because it needs to be caught, the answear is always sought!~ Brief Quote that should be taking into the poem as a whole-
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Re: Twisted is the ways
(User Rating: 1 ) by dreamer_for_eternity on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:28:48 PM AEST (User
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I like this a lot!! I'm not a big fan of the form though, it's not appealing to the eye in paragraph form like that, perhaps stanzas and lines would make it better? just a little advice, great meaning in this piece, though! |
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