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my lilith
Contributed by
widdlo
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:58:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lilth, the first wife,
Left selfish Adam.
Started a new life,
Forgot that shed had-him.
She gave birth
To the daemons,
-The creatures that dare-
Then returned to the earth,
No one knows where.
Now, this girl that I love
She’s a bit like lilth,
A daemon at times
(We have our rifts).
But her darkness and demands,
Only turn me on.
The darkness becomes warmth,
The demands lead me on.
Now, ‘wot is my point?’
I may hear you say.
‘Well there isn’t a point’
Is what I will say.
Just that I love her,
Just how she is.
I will never change her,
Won’t break my lilth's kiss.
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widdlo
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2005-06-05 14:58:01]
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Re: my lilith
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:46:48 PM AEST
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| This is so cute!!! It's written very well and the flow is great! |
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Re: my lilith
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by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 07:18:33 AM AEST
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| I like it. The only thing I would change is in line 4. "Forgot that shed had-him" to "Forgot that she'd had-him." Other than that. I think it's great. We all need our own Lillith at some point. |
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