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The Butterfly
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poet70
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:48:00 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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The Butterfly Flies
It goes to flowers to land
On a worm spring day
By: Tammi Pitman
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2005-06-05 14:48:00]
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Re: The Butterfly
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:02:30 PM AEST
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| Lol yeah they do, aww, I like butterflies, sometimes they can be so pretty, not like the little butter flies that are white or yellow, but I mean the real butterflies, with different colors and designs on their wings, now those are beautifull. SLipSiX. |
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Re: The Butterfly
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:49:08 PM AEST
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Cute write. Plain simple and True
Whisper |
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Re: The Butterfly
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:18:31 AM AEST
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nice job
thoughtful write |
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Re: The Butterfly
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:47:28 PM AEST
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Smiles.
*****The Butterfly Flies
It goes to flowers to land
On a worm spring day
Spring.. birth of life. I love this Tammi.
http://www.khandro.net/animal_butterfly.htm
Imagine them flying around at a wedding, instead of rice being thrown..
http://www.amazingbutterflies.com/wedding.htm
This write made me feel warm as your spring write. Very pretty poem. So picturesque. I can even hear their wings flutter and smell those beautiful flowers they blend in with.
Raquel Leah :D |
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