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Creature Creature
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:53:18 PM in AEST
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Creature, creature under my bed,
Please vacate the space in my head,
Please leave the maze of my mind,
You make it hard for sleep to find.
Creature, creature you scare me so,
All I ask is for you to go,
I am a scared & frightened child,
You unleash in me all that is wild.
Creature, Creature why can’t you see,
That it is wrong to live inside me,
My soul is scared when you’re around,
You creep & lurk never making a sound.
Creature, creature leave me alone,
Find somewhere else to call your home,
You fill my soul & mind with fear,
I can not relax knowing you are near.
Creature, creature please will you listen,
You make my insanity glisten,
When you are with me I want to kill,
But you’re just a reminder that I am ill.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: Creature Creature
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:57:26 PM AEST
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Wow---dark indeed. This is an excellently penned write. The dark undertones of what is seemingly the topic is what captured me...I hope all is well....Great job.
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Re: Creature Creature
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:59:06 PM AEST
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Awww Pixie..this is so sad... but nicely written. I have missed you so much. Hope all is well with you...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Creature Creature
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:05:47 PM AEST
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| Pixie this was an excellent write, very good words and chilling to the bone. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Creature Creature
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:06:42 PM AEST
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I like the way you tie everything together with the Creature, Creature. The poem has a good flow and rhyme.
Good to see you submit again, well done
Will |
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Re: Creature Creature
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:50:56 PM AEST
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So glad 2 see u back written pix, a beautiful and flowing peice stylish and very interesting
lovely as always . . . ((((((4 pix))))))
Ben
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Re: Creature Creature
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by toserious2 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:20:10 PM AEST
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| Very positive effort to trivial issure...Highly plain but rhythmic one...Good......Its title is quity nice..keep it up. |
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Re: Creature Creature
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:44:01 PM AEST
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| I see you haven't changed Pix .. good job as always. (hugs) mary |
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Re: Creature Creature
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by shelby on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:58:53 PM AEST
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glad to see you back Pix..... sorry that your so sad as always a brilliant masterpiece in the content of your write
hugs
Im here if you need to talk
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Re: Creature Creature
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by widdlo on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:03:37 PM AEST
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| cool, nice repitition. like the way youv'e keep it rythming without having to use irrelitive words |
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Re: Creature Creature
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:56:00 PM AEST
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Creepy poem here Krissie... I haven't talked
to you in forever and was growing worried
about you so it was good to see something
new by you even though it wasn't "happy". I
hope to touch base with you soon... I've been
working lots so maybe that is why I haven't
seen you around. Keep up the writing girl.
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Re: Creature Creature
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 04:28:27 AM AEST
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I love the whole concept of this, the whole descent into madness, great work pix.
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Re: Creature Creature
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 02:01:59 AM AEST
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Little Pixie girl, I didn't know.......I'm so sorry for not being able to show
sooner my dear.
I'm so happy for you that you have your pen....it will help you to feel better until all of this comes to an end.
I love you,
Please know I'm always here for you also!
Warm love
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Re: Creature Creature
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by secretwind on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 07:47:39 PM AEST
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| darkly delicious |
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