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I Have Nothing Left
Contributed by
sride686
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:02:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I have no words
I have no voice
I have no hope
I have no choice
With hate I burn
And a pain like greed
My pain is life
And there’s life in me
My thoughts are blood
As my thoughts flow
Blood that’s think
With pain it shows
Run down my face
And down my feet
And release this pain
that’s lost in grief
Tears in my eyes
Tears of disgust
With hate in my eyes
that’s full of lust
Demons in side
That tear me apart
That tear at my mind
And rip out my heart
With Anguish I Fall
For I’ve lost my life
I’ve given it up
For I’ve lost my pride
Death is sweat
And with a smile I see
My life and my love
As I’m taken to piece
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-06-05 12:02:27]
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Re: I Have Nothing Left
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by Unbreakable on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:30:02 PM AEST
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Wow..this is a great write, filled with feeling. I love the way it begins and the end is perfect. Good job!
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Re: I Have Nothing Left
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:44:49 PM AEST
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| Sorry about the errors in the write I just wrote it fast and submitted it then read it and noticed. The last word is peace as I’m sure you all know. But what ever ***** it you eather like it or you don’t….Steve |
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Re: I Have Nothing Left
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:45:20 PM AEST
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This is a very, VERY honest write. I applaud you for that Steve. The self loathing and anguish is so incredibly real in this piece...My heart goes out to you....Stay strong.
Scorp. |
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Re: I Have Nothing Left
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:18:34 PM AEST
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| Steve, you are in a land of pain. Fight hard to not let it overtake you. There has been hate, killing and war there since the beginning of time. It is not unusual you would feel it if you have any empathy in you at all. Please fight against it and stay safe and come home. Go deep into yourself and find the peace that is there and pull it out and shield yourself with it. The angels are beside you but cannot help if you give up your soul to this horror. Please continue to write out your anguish and I am here if you need to really vent it out. I do understand more than you know. Rita |
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Re: I Have Nothing Left
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:09:33 PM AEST
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hey there steve, all i have to say is.. another great poem from a great poet (and -from what i take from ur poems and were u are/what ur doin- a great person as well) keep up tha great work there!! :) if i had prayers, ud be in them lolz, but i will be thinkin of u and hopin for tha best!!! take care!!! lots of love!!
*~Amanda Hope~* |
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Re: I Have Nothing Left
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by desireemiote on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 12:43:55 PM AEST
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You may have returned by now but maybe you haven't I hope you are doing better than you were when you wrote this. I will be hoping for your safe return. I will also be hoping that you feel at peace without death. My hopes are with you.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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