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Rekindled Embers: Part II of Embers of My Love.
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The embers are rekindled,
but flame is not yet high.
Give me time and love,
and it will reach the sky.
Thanks for understanding,
the words that I had said.
Thanks so much for typing,
the words that I had read.
I still fear life a little,
but now it isn’t dread,
I don’t know how your sister,
put such thoughts in my head.
I’m not mad at anyone,
but shocked at myself.
Don’t know how I could put,
my love upon the shelf.
So honey please forgive me,
if I don’t act the same.
And honey please don’t worry,
you’ve again ignited the flame.
Copyright ©
Jessica_Saini
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2003-01-03 13:40:00]
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Re: Rekindled Embers: Part II of Embers of My Love.
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 01:44:07 PM AEST
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glad to hear that the flame has been ignited ..
keep fanning the fire..stay true to yourself
sharon |
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Re: Rekindled Embers: Part II of Embers of My Love.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 04:02:29 PM AEST
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Hey..great going!! Can't wait to read the third part... when the fire really gets raging!! :>)
Jenni |
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Re: Rekindled Embers: Part II of Embers of My Love.
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by venkat on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 04:34:18 AM AEST
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| In fact it is a nice feeling. life is like that.' put the life on shelf ' what a fine writing..venkat |
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Re: Rekindled Embers: Part II of Embers of My Love.
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by Jessica_Saini on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:12:41 AM AEST
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Thank you for all of your comments. They are appreciated:) I think someday I'll write a third poem, but I'm not sure when.
~Jessica |
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