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Heart's pain
Contributed by
toserious2
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 11:07:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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O Almighty being!
I know the way you assembled my heart.
In the mud of Arts,
Heated under the metallic beads.
And the sunshine got it more alight,
To let it grow wild,more bright.
Punctuated by the coolness of night,
Sighs and cries are never alike!
Day by day,in the current of care,
It outweighed all ware.
Face it got, was like the planet earth,
Land in fleshy can!sand for human worth!
The shimmer of hope through narrow points,
Loopholes for my character's cult.
Placed in blind winds to be mature,
And the beats of its songs grew pure.
"shhhh!shhhh!" were its formal accents,
But silent was its logical lore.
slumped in the house of darkness,
where loneliness was its host.
And seriousness was its abode.
Intuitive touch was out of HIS grace,
When HIS hands got involved.
Deeper it bacame, of thickest sort.
Drops of life drenched it,
And its flutter was built.
The day it came,when Rashid was in vain,
To learn the ways how heart behaves;
When got another one in his heart's space.
They call it my "Love",
But it's metaphor of my charm,
where decencies of it are at alarm.
It was never in the ingredients of it,
"Death in life with all its wit."
Copyright ©
toserious2
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2005-06-05 11:07:12]
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Re: Heart's pain
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:14:04 PM AEST
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Bravo!! Excellent rhyming and wordplay. What a story---you have so much to say. Really good job with this one...
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Re: Heart's pain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:38:09 PM AEST
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| FIrst, welcome to YPDC. this was a great dark write, it had wonderful depth in it and I loved it. BRAVO......I look forward to reading more of your writes. |
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Re: Heart's pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 06:36:41 PM AEST
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| I just love the imagery in this poem. Keep up the good work! |
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