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Your Turn
Contributed by
Northernrick
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I dont know if i can do this anymore
I held on for so long
Im not that strong..
Its like i dont even exist
u know wat bothers me
but u still take the risk...
See wat i See,
Hear wat i Hear for just one day
You would understand,
Why i want to run away....
Leave this place
start from new
get away
away from you..
Have all this love kept inside
but u dont except it
so it has to hide
Ive given up
U better change
or we will both go through
alot of pain...
Copyright ©
Northernrick
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2005-06-05 10:11:53]
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Re: Your Turn
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:07:16 PM AEST
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maybe you should just let go, i know the thought of it sends chills down your spine, because you truely love the person, but letting go my help.. but this was a great poem.. good job..
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Re: Your Turn
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:36:23 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem, as usual.
I sense the pain here.. I agree with tasha letting go might help..
Whatever you decide just keep writing, its beautiful.
xoxo
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