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Sweetest Dreams
Contributed by
panther_1978
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Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You are the thunder in my broken heart,
it beets when I'm near you.
You are the angel of my sweetest dreams,
so radiant, so beautiful and so full of love.
You are the watch on my arm,
whenever I talk to you, it stops.
You are the radio in my house,
all the songs that I love.
You are like my favorite coat,
you keep me so warm.
You are my everyday sunlight,
I wake up to you each day.
You are my brightest moon,
every night I fall asleep to you.
You are like my favorite poem,
you're with me wherever I go.
You are the most beautiful bird,
like the wind beneath my wings.
You are with me each time I sleep,
every night I dream of you.
You are my favorite rose scented candle,
your love never goes out!
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2003-01-03 13:20:00]
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Re: Sweetest Dreams
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 01:29:13 PM AEST
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sometimes cheesy says it all...this is sweet
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Re: Sweetest Dreams
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by OreO on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 05:32:45 PM AEST
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Mike this is so beautiful, it's breathtaking...the way you worded every one of your feelings out here in this poem....your heart is beautiful..i love every single line here, i think this is so far my favoritest poem of yours...you put so much heart and emotions and love into writing this poem, i think it's absolutely beautiful...this made me cry ....i cant help but read it again and again...it's a very soothing poem to me...You will never know how much this poem means to me my beautiful friend...
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Re: Sweetest Dreams
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:48:29 PM AEST
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Pass me 2 slices of bread..I wanna make me a sandwich...lmao....
Loved this, Mike....
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Re: Sweetest Dreams
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by Mystery_Girl on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 03:30:51 AM AEST
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| What a nice write....and i have one of those scented candles for someone that their love never goes out.....and he knows it...... take care....tanya....:-) |
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Re: Sweetest Dreams
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:42:38 PM AEST
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Awww...this is beautiful!
"You are the watch on my arm,
whenever I talk to you, it stops.
You are the radio in my house,
all the songs that I love. "
That's the best part! :)
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