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lost
Contributed by
pinkpanther
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:22:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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lost
is the sadness in the air
lost
is the lonlyness inside you
lost
is the forgetness withinyou
lost
is the silentness of theme
lost
at the end you are forgoton
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Re: lost
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:44:36 AM AEST
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| I don't think you are lost just searching.If you don't mind a small crito your spelling could do with a little work.Apart from that well done |
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Re: lost
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:14:47 PM AEST
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| I agree, I do not think you are lost, I think you are kind of experiencing what you might be feeling, and then again you are also searching for what your feelings want. Or something like that, lol. |
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