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emotions
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Emotions runnin' through my head
emotions make me wish I'm dead
all these emotions seem so real
they make me unsure how to feel
should i be happy, sad, or grateful?
my confusion makes me feel so pitiful
unwanted, pathetic, and so distraught
is this the fate that i have caught?
emotions
commotion
emotions
devotion
emotions devoted to creating commotion
the disarray makes my mind decay
emotions makin' me feel this way
emotions will take my life one day
overwhelmed, overloaded
my minds so bloated
its about to explode
so i gotta unload
I'm livin' in vain
so ill abolish my pain
Ive nothin' to gain
so my blood i will drain
emotions
commotion
emotions
devotion
emotions got the best of me
they completely flooded my head
emotions got the best of me
and now I'm laying here dead.
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
Copyright ©
bethers_is_my_baby
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Re: emotions
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by poet70 on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:54:07 PM AEST
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Wow, this would have also fit in the dark poem section as well. It was very moving, very descriptive, Bethers, you did a great job on this poem,
Keep on writing,
Tammi |
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Re: emotions
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by mylastwords on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:30:08 AM AEST
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This is an awesome poem. I really like it. You express it really well and it flows nicely too! Keep up the great work, and keep your head up!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: emotions
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:29:57 PM AEST
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| Wow what a great write and a great flow. Lots of pain in this write but it was really well written and I enjoyed it. I know these feelings all to well my friend thanks for sharing. Bye for now my friend….Steve |
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Re: emotions
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:44:55 AM AEST
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Wow! This is my favorite of yours! Awesome write!! Keep it up
--amanda-- |
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Re: emotions
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by tiggytom on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:35:15 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this very much thanks |
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