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Aviary for an Angel
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:33:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I found you in a cage
I-found- you-like-my-heart
Torn and broken with your wings clipped
So-I- reached-inside-me
With hope in one hand I found a key
I opened the cage but you did not fly away
You did not come to me
So I went to you
Took-you-into-my-arms
Your heart was beating
I felt it take over mine
You closed your eyes and fell asleep
So I carried you home
You were too broken to be set free
And so I took it upon my self to help you mend
You where too beautiful not to fall for
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Re: Aviary for an Angel
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by poet70 on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:46:54 PM AEST
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I tell the truth when I say I like it, but I am a little confused, you put it in the love and romance section? but I see you talking about a bird, hmmm different. Still a good poem.
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Re: Aviary for an Angel
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by Gothchyk on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 11:16:00 PM AEST
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| awweee, i love it, muaw |
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Re: Aviary for an Angel
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:13:41 PM AEST
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nice write.. heartfelt
I like the bird analogy..
But in the last line.. thinkin' you meant
to say "were" instead of "where"..
good job though-
B |
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Re: Aviary for an Angel
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by pixie on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:54:43 PM AEST
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a very beautiful write :)
pix xx |
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Re: Aviary for an Angel
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by little_genna on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:02:06 PM AEST
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| so incredibly beautiful and moving....... |
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Re: Aviary for an Angel
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:11:25 PM AEST
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uh-uh i get the metaphor, it is very deep but a great write of substance and love. im sure she appreciates you helping her to fly again, u are a wonderful person.
i love the last line, o well done |
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