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I Came to You

Contributed by sprinter27 on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:47:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Can you see what’s happening?
I went to you for a helping hand
I know you can see my hurt and struggling
I can see it in your eyes when you are staring
At me; watching to see what I’ll do
Wondering what’s my next move
The only thing you know is from the poem
That I snatched from your palm
You were watching me since you read
It; I feel your eyes drilling into my head
I look away, I look down
I can’t face the frown
That is plastered on your face
You are wondering if this is just a phase
If it’s the real thing or not
Well, I’ve given it all I’ve got
I’ve failed many times, this is true
And you are the one I went to
But you don’t know how to handle my pain
I went to you for some reassurance and to gain
You on my side, but now I don’t know
I try to run, I try to go
Now that you know, I want to leave
This was just a mistake I do believe
I shouldn’t have come to you
Now you are confused too
Wondering what’s wrong
And why I’m so down
Your eyes– they are watching me
Waiting, for me to see
But I will not look into your eyes
That takes too much and I know I’ll cry
All I know is that I came to you with courage
And now I’m in rage
I’m mad at myself and yelling
I shouldn’t let you see me falling
I know you’ll try to catch me
I know you’ll try to fight my enemy
D*** it… I don’t know why
I came to you when I want to die
I know you’ll fight my urge
To take a lurch
Off of the side
That’s why you are beside
Me now, looking, watching
It feels like you are holding
Me back from the edge
Like you won’t let me near the ledge
I don’t know why
I went to you when I cried
When what I wanted was death
When all I wanted was to be dead
I went to you friend
When I wanted the end
I don’t know why I did it
I don’t understand a bit
Why it was you
I came to

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-06-04 21:47:26]
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Re: I Came to You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 06:20:22 PM AEST
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very nice written

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