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Exhumed
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:33:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The smell of burning rubber draws attention
To the thick black cloud of smoke which has formed overhead
The strangest of occurrences are those trapped in a cell
A manifestation of the miracle that is creation, the bed is made
Fortuitous in monetary value, but poor in what really counts
The royal couple and their servants, arrive to stay unannounced
Fleeing is fruitless, the fortune teller follows the crystal ball
The earlobes and its piercing are holier now they are reattached
Ominous in its appearance the tornado of damnation bears down
This collection of antique relics from an occupation of the people pushed around
Presently speaking my mind only makes one galactic connection
The purest creature on the planet, is currently walking to my exact location
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Re: Exhumed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:56:59 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoy reading your work..
the message always clear-
also, never once have I EVER seen
one spelling or puncuation error..
not once.
It does make it easier for us..(the grammatically anal) and I thank you.. lol
great write friend.
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