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ANGELS IN HELL
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:32:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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The children of my heart
hold the grief of this
unbearable sorrow
Tear stained faces
looking to mama for
answers to this riddle
mama will ease the pain
Answer your questions,
I try my angels hold
back the truth i'll
sugar coat, all the
while tracing the silver
lining along your cloud
Hold you near
pressed to my heart
hold back my tears
smile as I slowly fall apart
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sweetoccasion29
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2005-06-04 20:32:55]
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Re: ANGELS IN HELL
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:41:38 PM AEST
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aww.... i like this poem. and the "mama" part reminds me of the song "Hero of the Day" i like this poem and the song. keep up the good work.
~sprints |
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Re: ANGELS IN HELL
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by Serendippitty on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:58:15 PM AEST
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| I really liked this, holding back tears, not being able to cry when something is wrong, I know the feeling... i look forward to reading more, liked the title too |
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Re: ANGELS IN HELL
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:09:31 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful tanya, i know your feeling , I think we took the art of trying to fix everything for our kids from mom.love always lovely29 A.K.A NATAS |
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Re: ANGELS IN HELL
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:29:10 PM AEST
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A sad and touching poem i hear your words
and feel your sadness in my heart always
here 4 u your pro . . . (((((((4tanya))))) Ben |
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Re: ANGELS IN HELL
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by Kamal on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 01:32:07 PM AEST
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Whoa thats pretty
made me recollect about life for a minute or two |
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