|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
EmPty FaCe
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 06:03:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
The girl shouted stop with a crying voice.
The boy told her that she only had one choice.
Scream and you'll die.
To run you dont even have to try.
The girl couldnt move.
Not even hear her own breath.
And she knew that if shed struggle.
That would be her death.
So she didnt try to escape.
And she never cried.
She just laid on the ground.
Wile he took away her pride.
She didnt run and she didnt scream .
She just faded away like in a very bad dream.
When he was done with the girl.
And she was trying to shout.
He killed her of anger.
Just to shut her mouth.
A dark land was her very last place.
And the last thing she saw.
Was a rapist's empty face.
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
... [
2005-06-04 18:03:57]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: EmPty FaCe
(User Rating: 1 )
by THEL0STDREAMER on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 06:34:56 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| raw emotion... good rhyming.. i liked it though it was sad. |
|
|
Re: EmPty FaCe
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 07:05:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh wow honey, this is horrible! I really hope this didn't happen to you. This poem had so much emotion and pain in it...I hope you're alright, and please pm me if you ever want to someone to talk to....Take Care,
Scorp. |
|
|
Re: EmPty FaCe
(User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:40:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| omg that is so terrible, the situation not the poem the poem was full of emotion and deep good job |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
