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Dimensions of 10
Contributed by
jaycee
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:13:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The vastness of space
in dimensions of ten
don't be bound to the ground
but explore like norsemen
Aboard the sleek ship
faster than tachyon
the worlds wait for me
gorgeous as the swan
The phonemena are many
white dwarfs and black holes
to visit them all
is the greatest of goals
The accretion disk swirling
matter bows to its master
the spinning's relentless
rotating faster and faster
Gravity beckons me forward
the pull inexhorable
retros can't halt the descent
now I'm in trouble
Beyond the trap time is fast
but on the rocket it slows
I'm beyond PNR
it's where nobody goes
The tides they do come
and stretch me like taffy
the strain is killing me
my brain has gone daffy
The end has arrived
as I ponder regret
their time whipping by
of me they forget
... I pound the red button
at my courage I scoff
The ship powers off in its
bay; I never took off
Copyright ©
jaycee
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2005-06-04 17:13:44]
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Re: Dimensions of 10
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:28:38 PM AEST
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I am awed by your talent, your geekness! This truly made me feel sad that they forgot you and you didn't get to go with the ship. That just plain sux. :(
Rita |
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Re: Dimensions of 10
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:37:14 PM AEST
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Wow!! This left me speechless.....and I mean speechless!!!!!!
:>)
Seriously tho....I was lost after the 2nd verse...
Ms Ditch
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Re: Dimensions of 10
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:37:54 PM AEST
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ha thats interesting... a good interesting... i like the rythm and style. i like the ending lol.
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Re: Dimensions of 10
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 05:10:39 PM AEST
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Jaycee!!!
I love this , another masterpiece, you have written (spoken like the yoda) I love intelligence it potrays and the images it brought to my mind . Also love the blog on NASA!!!!! Great write!!!
Leia xxxooo |
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