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You'll make it through tonight.
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 01:21:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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a blanket of stars covers the earth engulfing its every sight.
lingering souls intrigued by these powerful lights.
drawn to the mass space between life & death ....in which we place the sky.
Lonely dreamers sit alone, wishing upon them, only asking why.
the air thins, and cold winds blow making this scene yet more magical to our sight
You cannot see it, or grasp it, but only faith and love will take you to this height.
under the stars its alright
to hold eachother tight.
because the insecurity is so great during the unending night
its alright, its just right,
and looking into each others eyes feeling lost
in the depths of a journey, not knowing what to feel
hoping with all your heart that everything is real.
and then as you fall asleep
lieing in each others arms
your disarmed.
its alright to hold on tight.
faith will make it right.
just hold on through the night.,
its alright, its just right.
you'll make it through tonight.
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bttrflynajar
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Re: You'll make it through tonight.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 01:42:33 PM AEST
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This poem really moved me . I love the images i got in my mind as i read it and how i felt a peace about it.
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Re: You'll make it through tonight.
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:10:15 PM AEST
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| I agree.Very moving poem.There is something quite magical about the night.sitting under the stars.I may wish on one tonight. |
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Re: You'll make it through tonight.
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:21:36 PM AEST
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Wonderful---I really enjoyed this lovely write! Nice ending too...
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