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Beautiful Buzz
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 11:05:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Nothing has been burned
We are all still safe and sound
The alarm you heard
In your aching head
Were the birds that crashed
Was the blue veins leaking red
They have no names
These people who rot
The people of the daytime
The children of the night
The effervescent glow
Of the pale moonlight
Leaves this haunting sensation
That your feel
When you know your always right
Freedoms of situations
That needs not even exist
To come to fruition
Or rather to persist
It is the common man
Who can not bare witness
Make this quick and painless
A self-proclaimed judge
As infallible as he wishes
Ok, so, what do you know?
Ok, then, where you gonna’ go?
Where is your raft to stay afloat?
When is your time of arrival,
I might make a mental note
Go then, the time has come!
Always take care, my friend
My confidante
My beautiful buzz
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Re: Beautiful Buzz
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by bttrflynajar on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 01:29:43 PM AEST
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| ambiguous... i like it alot. mostly because i can make of it what i like. i really like your style. |
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Re: Beautiful Buzz
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:32:15 PM AEST
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Very contradictory, but I'm sure that was the intent. Well worded and well expressed struggle of emotions.
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