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All You Are To Me
Contributed by
Your_baby_girl_4life
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:35:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are the reason I want to live,
You are the reason I can still breathe.
You are the first thing that comes to mind in the morning,
You are my first thought each day.
It is your picture locked in my heart,
It is your sexy voice locked in my mind.
Without you I'd be lost,
Without you I'd be nothing.
With you I can find my way any where,
With you I feel important.
Your love is that makes me capable of anything,
You love is what keeps me sane.
You bring me happiness,
You bring me confidende.
You are my addiction that brings me satisfaction,
You are my dreams coming to life in front of my own eyes.
You are the pillow under my head that gives me comfort,
You are the stuffed animal that eliminates my fears.
You own my heart,
You own my love.
Hopefully one day I can be all this to you also.
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Your_baby_girl_4life
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2005-06-04 09:35:55]
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Re: All You Are To Me
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by PuppyChow on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:58:28 AM AEST
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| i think its fine! i like the choice of metaphors and stuff. gr8 job |
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Re: All You Are To Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 01:46:15 PM AEST
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Besides a couple minor stumbling blocks with spelling, this was a well written piece. The emotions and love were so well described...I was able to relate to this one quite well. Nice job.
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Re: All You Are To Me
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:12:24 PM AEST
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| It certainly doesn't suck.It's a lovely poem that tells your girl just how you feel.Great job |
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