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Last in line
Contributed by
evilapple
on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 09:52:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Last in line
Looking at the up and coming
Brushing all their bad points away
Last in line
Knowing if I was next
I'd forget what I was waiting for
You don't know what I know
Knowing all that they want
Friendship can only go so far
Before my mind breaks down the door
Last in line
Don't care if I die without you
Knowing what the others will think
Last in line
Seeing all the easy lines
But to afraid to claim the prize
I don't want to dream any more
Dreaming can only make it worse
Lose myself to my stronger friends
They can't see my further plans
Copyright ©
evilapple
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2002-07-22 21:52:37]
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Re: Last in line
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by chatabox on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 01:11:14 AM AEST
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why, I wonder ?
deep write this, set me thinking though. |
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Re: Last in line
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by Kassidi on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 02:32:49 AM AEST
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Very deep and heartfelt poem. It also sent me thinking.
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Re: Last in line
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 08:14:49 PM AEST
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Interesting write here..
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