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Untitled
Contributed by
broken_wingz
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 03:56:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Alone in darkness is where I sit,
Contemplating my worthless life.
I never wanted to end this way,
And yet I've still picked up the knife.
I used to be strong and full of will,
But this nothingness has left me numb.
I feel as though there is no reason to live,
All that's left is the pain to come.
Do not tell me to stay strong,
For it is much too late for that.
The only strength that I have left,
Is enough to end this crap.
My hands are shaking with each line I write,
Because I know that when this is through,
I will be nothing more than an empty space,
Which is a lot more than I was to you.
Before I go I just wanted to say,
That it's not always what you see.
Be kind to everyone you meet,
Because they may end up like me.
Copyright ©
broken_wingz
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2005-06-04 03:56:59]
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Re: Untitled
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 04:37:50 AM AEST
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| You don.t have to be alone.there are lots of good people out there waiting to lend a helping hand.It's not easy to be strong but try .Take one day at a time.Life can be cruel but it can also be great.good luck |
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Re: Untitled
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by PuppyChow on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:27:41 AM AEST
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| kno how you feel, i used to be like that. then all my friends slapped me back into reality. hope you have some like that. liked the poem, great job. one of the best things about being depressed is u can get some really good poems outta it. |
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Re: Untitled
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by 15andcounting on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 12:59:59 PM AEST
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| This an amazingly powerful poem, and seems to fully convey all of your feelings. Don't you feel like a load was lifted after you wrote this? This poem should open every one's eyes to the society underneath the surface. Excellent job, and I hope you resolve your issues with yourself. |
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