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The Rain
Contributed by
Duncan
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 03:42:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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The persistent music plays
Gently on the windowpane;
The forked rivulets distort the prospect
Without,
Whilst I remain dry.
Copyright ©
Duncan
... [
2005-06-04 03:42:30]
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Re: The Rain
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 04:40:09 AM AEST
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| Quietly sad.I was sat in that car with you.short but effective |
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Re: The Rain
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by speed-of-sound on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:46:25 AM AEST
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| i agree. this poem really draws you in. i love rain, it can be so enchanting at times. good write. :) |
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Re: The Rain
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:58:49 AM AEST
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How facinatingly creative. It's short but oh so perfect.
Loved it.
Jane xx |
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Re: The Rain
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 07:41:46 AM AEST
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| short and sweet, well done |
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