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Sincere Thoughts

Contributed by allornothing on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:10:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You turned me into something beautiful
Contrasted by the hidieous situations
Blanketed in emotions

There was power in breaking
The indifferent manboy
Hot tears streaming down the face of the one i love;
Proving his.

Our love vulnerable
In its naitivity.
In our eyes something much bigger than this world has to offer
But rather truthfully a feather paperthin
In the whirlwind of life
We hold on
Dearly for its sake and let go ultimitely for the same...
Unable to weather the storm
We can only go on alone.
But hush! let no one know
That I carry him close
This secret now mine
When once we harbored it both...

My mother peeks her head inside my door
She loves me
She will always love me regardless.
It is a beautiful love
I know that love first hand

He is on the brink of near madness
It stares him in the eye
Only love will save you now it whispers in his ear
Only love will save me now
He answers as he falls
The descent is endless and linear
Her voice echoes on...

This is the romance i adore
Lasting in its tragedy
Epic truth in its beauty.

Copyright © allornothing ... [ 2005-06-04 02:10:39]
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Re: Sincere Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 11:18:37 AM AEST
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Thought provoking.
Subtle and breezy.
Some interesting comparisons...
"Unable to weather the storm"

And how I, too, simply 'adore' a Shakespearean ending.
"Lasting in its tragedy
Epic truth in its beauty."

Amazing.

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