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Laying It Out
Contributed by
failariel_ancalime
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 01:09:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Can you hear me,
I am calling.
Can you see me,
I am falling.
I wish you could catch me,
Pull me into your arms.
I'm falling,
In love with you, that is.
There's something about you.
I don't quite get it yet.
Why do I seem to like you,
When we have far from met?
Is this the poem?
Is this it?
Will I be forced to tell you,
Or will I merely quit?
I will finally tell you.
You've been waiting so long.
I hope I have been good to you.
I hope I did nothing wrong.
That's it, I'll tell you.
You have more than just one clue.
I'll lay it out, quick and easy.
I just simply love you.
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Re: Laying It Out
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by humboldthunny17 on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 01:48:18 AM AEST
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i know how you feel. you "laid it out" soo well.
i wish i could do that
x0x0, cebre |
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Re: Laying It Out
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:47:34 PM AEST
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youve expressed such great feelings in this piece of work!
well done! |
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Re: Laying It Out
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by candyistoo-sweet on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:32:52 PM AEST
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| this is all so real, and its cute and well written |
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