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Denied
Contributed by
failariel_ancalime
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 12:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Twisting.
Tumbling.
Turning over everything.
Curving.
Crumbling.
Crying over nothing.
Awake.
Affraid.
Alone with no one caring.
Humble.
Hurthing.
Healing from all the pain.
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2005-06-04 00:58:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Denied
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:08:52 AM AEST (User
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an emotional write.
simple is more!
well done. |
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Re: Denied
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 03:22:36 AM AEST (User
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i like this one alot. the lines flow quickly and easily. yet hold alot of emotions in them. great write! A+++ |
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