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Goodbye For Now

Contributed by cooley1818 on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:04:16 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



i love you today
but tomorrow's never the same
its the difference in emotion
its the difference in pain
i know i'll exagurate
i know i'm fake
i'm to catious with love
to ever make the same mistake
i'm to hard on myself
im to weak to break through
break through this wall
that i built to hid from you
i'd present my love
with golden flowers and dreams
with a heart of passion
by the clear waters stream
i'll cast this wish
upon the oceans glowing light
which reflects from the stars
and brings me back to that night
its all i think about
its all so clear
i'll cry a thousand rivers
to wash away these fears
the sun will lighten the day
and the moon will shadow the night
between these 2
this lifes a constant fight
my heart bleeds
from this tragic sin
and these eyes pour
from the pain within
but to many days remain
to think about the end
im wasting my life
to watch things stay the same
i want to end this
but really i dont know how
so i'll just say goodbye
goodbye....for now




Copyright © cooley1818 ... [ 2005-06-03 22:04:16]
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Re: Goodbye For Now (User Rating: 1 )
by allornothing on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:39:14 AM AEST
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i can relate! i recently bid farewell to the one i love and it has proved to be the most difficult thing i have ever done in my lifetime


Re: Goodbye For Now (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 12:50:26 PM AEST
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This is a very well expressed write here...I truly enjoyed this, and can absolutely relate. One small complaint though...The grammar and spelling mistakes---it takes away from a great poem a little...Maybe double check next time before you post, but nicely done all the same!
Scorp.


Re: Goodbye For Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Adnausiam on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:24:46 AM AEST
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You have good stuff. Of course it takes good inspiration and she seems like that. I love the way u use the battle between the sun and moon. It's a powerful way to put it. Lots of reads too. Nice.


Re: Goodbye For Now (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 01:22:03 AM AEST
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u have magic fingers, uh huh




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