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You Asked Me
Contributed by
Yuri
on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:59:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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You asked me why I looked so sad
You asked me why I felt so bad
But you don't really care at all
you weren't there when I took a fall
I told of pain and rain and cold
I told of darkness in my soul
I told you I couldn't take this hell
you weren't there when I finally fell
you were my only reason for life
you were the on who could stop this strife
You asked me why I looked so sad
I told you the reason
and you didn't feel bad.
Copyright ©
Yuri
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2005-06-03 21:59:18]
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Re: You Asked Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:01:44 PM AEST
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| ooh i like it..very short but very good |
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Re: You Asked Me
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by Yuri on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:05:25 PM AEST
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| Thank you. Yeah, I'm constantly writing really short poems. I usually space a lot more. That's what makes them *look* long. |
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Re: You Asked Me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:46:24 AM AEST
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| this is awesome, well done |
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