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Pulled the trigger
Contributed by
Yuri
on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:36:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Here I am
gun to head
hand to trigger
on my bed
lying down
getting ready
for the pain
to shoot steady
bring the pain
bring the death
for what you did
you used meth
pull the trigger
let it go
I'm going now
don't you know?
and so I'm gone
lost forever
empty body
I pulled the lever
there I went
the pain got bigger
I held the gun
and pulled the trigger.
Copyright ©
Yuri
... [
2005-06-03 21:36:05]
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Re: Pulled the trigger
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:44:08 PM AEST
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i loved this poem!! it's got lots of emotion. and let me tell you that i've felt like this many times- like my poem "My Time to End". all i have to say is... don't do it! your good at writing poems.... this site can't lose you. i wish you luck!
Keep up the good work!!
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Re: Pulled the trigger
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by Yuri on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:48:09 PM AEST
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| Thank you. All I have to say is that I refuse to die until I publish a book of my poems. Then it will be my time. I hope it comes soon. |
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Re: Pulled the trigger
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 01:03:03 PM AEST
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amazing, powerful, dark, and beautiful. my advice? never pull the trigger, but if you must die, never leave you blood on another's hands.
i love the poem
- Beth - |
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