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Slow Death

Contributed by sprinter27 on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:32:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



As she lets go
Life begins to slow
As she slowly dies
Past years go by
There are only 15 years
She bursts into tears
What was the point of being here?
If she was just to bear
It for only 15 years?
Then she begins to fear
That she did the wrong thing
But then remembers the arguing and fighting
Then knows it was right
To give up her end of the fight
Then her one friend runs next to her
Yes, the one that didn’t care
About her for awhile now
But that friend screams ‘how?’
She looks up at her friend through bloody eyes
And sees her friend cry
She smiles at her friend and grabs his hand
‘Don’t worry my dear friend,
You left me first, now I get to leave
But please don’t miss me
And don’t feel bad
Although it was you who made me sad
But, really, just move on
I know you can’
His tears are now falling onto her body
‘But why… why didn’t you call anybody?’
‘I did. You just didn’t hear me
Then I got sick of screaming
And getting no reply
It might hurt now, but really I have to die
You’ll see this sometime
You’ll see it from my side
Then you’ll understand
And then you won’t be so sad
Please friend,
Realize that it’s my time to end
It may hurt now, I know
But all I could do was let go’
He watches his friend fall weak
And he begins to scream
He cradles her body next to his
Wishing he could’ve helped prevent this
He begins to curse himself
As tears pour down his face




Copyright © sprinter27 ... [ 2005-06-03 21:32:51]
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Re: Slow Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 11:10:23 PM AEST
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Good poem i liked it a whole lot lookin forward to reading more keep it up!~Kay-Kay


Re: Slow Death (User Rating: 1 )
by lady-quiet-dreamer on Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 12:46:00 AM AEST
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painful yet beautiful. keep up the good writeing
lady dreamer




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