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''Soul Suicide''
Contributed by
andSHEbled__xx
on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:39:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Always wanting what you don't need
A moral decision between love and greed
Important choices to make without knowing what's right
Giving in to temptation without putting up a fight
[When did it get so hard
To say what you feel?
When did it get so hard
To resist what you conceal?]
Overwhelmed by concious desire
Ready and waiting to fuel the fire
Left empty and longing, out in the rain
A substance abuse to relieve the pain
[The passion dies
When you close the door
Bleeding from the heart
To live once more.]
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andSHEbled__xx
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2005-06-03 19:39:32]
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Re: ''Soul Suicide''
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 12:24:17 PM AEST
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Wow---this is potent. Well done! Some people really slept on this good write! I'm glad I read it. Keep up the great work.
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Re: ''Soul Suicide''
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by KayeRains on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 04:36:11 PM AEST
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Striking. I especially likd this....
'Overwhelmed by concious desire
Ready and waiting to fuel the fire
Left empty and longing, out in the rain
A substance abuse to relieve the pain'
Kudos. Keep it up. Hope to read more.
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