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The Apple of my Eye
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 06:24:52 PM in AEST
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It’s the chemistry between us, the litmus, paper, is blue
It’s the drowsy sensation, that awakens, the sincere side of you
Tonight we spend the night gazing, onto stars we knew not existed
We wonder at the peculiar orbits taken by the new moon repositioned
The rolling thunder that scares off the feeding crows brings a wet surrender
The scarecrow that stares and wonders how it all tastes inside
The night is spent without a tear, even though you wept profusely at times
It’s absolutely your right to disappear, who am I to tell you where to hide
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2005-06-03 18:24:52]
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Re: The Apple of my Eye
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 06:43:50 PM AEST
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Interesting write...Can't say I fully understand it tho....
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Re: The Apple of my Eye
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by shelby on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:04:31 PM AEST
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very vivid love it
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Re: The Apple of my Eye
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 08:26:44 PM AEST
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I also love it
very deep thoughts..
awesome imagery..
so much said in such few words..
great write here-
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Re: The Apple of my Eye
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:11:57 PM AEST
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This is a intense write the imagery is vived , it does seem like it could have a dark meaning to it
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Re: The Apple of my Eye
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 12:00:38 PM AEST
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Litmus---lol *having school flashbacks* I felt a lot of different vibes in this....: Innocence, hope, desire, sensuality, some sadness and regret...I think you did a good job with this.
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