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cant get away..

Contributed by hollow_eyed_girl on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 05:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

lost in my own f***ed up twisted mind
the true me you will never find
buried deep with in
so i just put on a sweet grin
and tell everyone its all ok
but really i just want them all to go away
but they never do
then i say things i cant undo
something like "get the h*** away from me"
all those meanies!
i cant take it when the man i love puts a gun to his head
then night after night i wonder if its tonight hell be found dead
every night its him i cry for
every night more and more
i won his heart but it already belongs to some other girl
a girl who makes me want to hurl
shes one of my friends too
it discusts me as much as it does u
but the good part
is slowly its numbing my heart
soon i will no longer feel anything
absolutly nothing
then and only then will i be alright
and no longer will i have to fight
i wont cry i wont hurt

Copyright © hollow_eyed_girl ... [ 2005-06-03 17:59:19]
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Re: cant get away.. (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:22:02 PM AEST
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I can see you are going through pain.This poem shows the hurt you feel.A couple of spelling mistakes but apart from that it made sense.I think it would have read better without the swear words but I suppose that's just how you feel.sorry no one else has taken the time to comment on your poem.good luck

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