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Shadow
Contributed by
Fears
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:44:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My eyes are driping
drops of blood
He will never know
how much I love him.
His face is in the clouds
and sent is in the flowers
They way he said "ma"
is engraved in my mind.
He started crying
and I didnt want him to let me go.
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Fears
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2005-06-03 15:44:59]
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Re: Shadow
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by Fears on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:46:43 PM AEST
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I dont belive that he let me go...but he did and I know this is a horrible write, but i cannot concentrate on anything right now.
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Re: Shadow
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:21:02 PM AEST
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Awwww... don't give yourself a hard time about it...
Sure, it needs some work, but it's not terrible. I especially love this:
His face is in the clouds
I have known that...
I hope your pain eases soon.
*hugs*
Phil xxx
(Only a PM away)
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Re: Shadow
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 11:17:46 AM AEST
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Aww sweetie...this is so sad! Don't worry; a little time and your soul will heal, you'll see. Nothing ever wrong with a poem that releases heavy emotions...Keep writing.
Scorp ; ) |
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