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Him
Contributed by
Addelyn
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My fury boils at the thought of him
His hunger for power controls his actions
He has been twisted by his love
Into a man I no longer recognize
His control of those around him
Keeps me from tearing him apart
His soul is corrupt
His mind lustful and filthy
His “Christian” outlook a sham
He destroys those that defy him
And praise those who lick his feet
His power grows with each passing day
His appetite will never be satisfied
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Addelyn
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2005-06-03 15:39:18]
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Re: Him
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by Fears on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:49:00 PM AEST
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horrible. good write. keep on posting.
~Fears
(ah, just tear him apart, lol, kiddin ) |
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Re: Him
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:23:14 PM AEST
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Hmmm, I have known people like this.
They think they are everything, when really they are not really that important.
They always seem to be someone they are not at first...
This is a good poem. Very powerful, and I can feel the anger in this.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Him
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:45:52 PM AEST
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| well done, well written |
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Re: Him
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 08:08:54 PM AEST
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"He destroys those that defy him
And praise those who lick his feet
His power grows with each passing day
His appetite will never be satisfied"
Sounds like he should lick some ppl's feet, maybe then his appetite will change and he will see that he stuffed. Anyway, another great write my dear. |
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