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Hell & Heaven
Contributed by
sapphireshadow
on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:08:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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After my Death,
Hell Froze over for me
and
Heaven caught Fire
Copyright ©
sapphireshadow
... [
2005-06-03 15:08:21]
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Re: Hell & Heaven
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:45:36 PM AEST
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Oooh, I do like this.
I wish it was longer though, you could make an amazing longer poem with this.
I love the heaven line, it's fabulous.
Let me know if you ever decide to make it longer.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Hell & Heaven
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:51:34 PM AEST
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| short and sweet, i like it.well done |
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Re: Hell & Heaven
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:55:47 AM AEST
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Well you've piqued my interest...I hope you expand on this at some point, you've got a potentially great concept going on here...
Scorp. |
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Re: Hell & Heaven
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by axeman on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:51:18 PM AEST
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| cool poem. read my poems and tell me what u think |
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