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Last Soliloquy
Contributed by
Thivanka
on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 12:30:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I took to heart I was gonna kill myself;
Today my gun would topple from its shelf;
These damn senses would be no more,
Fears, desires would cease to grow—
Up yours, damn Life! This will be the end,
No more torment, no longer your friend.
My Magnum loves bone-splinters and skull,
But to you all this may sound dull
Having heard suicide threats many times before—
But remember, I’m no pussy of yore.
I will kill myself I swear
For these thoughts I simply cannot bear,
Damn you! Heartless piece of life,
Just wait till I cut my wrist with this knife.
Gun or knife?
Gun is good. Painless end to life.
Copyright ©
Thivanka
... [
2005-06-03 12:30:34]
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Re: Last Soliloquy
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 12:56:41 PM AEST
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This is a well written, well worded poem with good flow, but disturbing in its nature. If you ever feel you'd like to talk with someone, please feel free to pm me...Take Care,
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Re: Last Soliloquy
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:33:05 PM AEST
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| you write so well- I hope this was NOT your last one....Peace and Light |
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