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Sink into clay
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 11:31:51 AM in AEST
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I make all the places
that i stay in to pray
like this cube of red ice
that sinks into clay
i paint many faces
twist happiness pain
babies and eggs
admire the blame
yellow and black
are stains on the mind
the madness is trying
to stay far behind
i'll paint one more rainbow
for all to see gold
i won't let the stain go
cause i like to be cold
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Re: Sink into clay
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:00:47 PM AEST
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Wow---this is great! Expressed superbly...I really enjoyed this.
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Re: Sink into clay
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by sride686 on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:55:29 PM AEST
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| Scorp is write this is a good write DW. So well worded with a strong meaning and release of emotions in it. The last line was awesome and its me to a T. I’m a very melancholy person and I like to be sad how twisted is that. But again you have done a outstanding write that has touched the mind of another reader. Take care my friend….Steve |
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