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Hiding inside
Contributed by
xdeadxdollyx
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 06:58:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Theres a place I like to hide
The deepest darkest place past my soul
It tortures my mind
Its my favorite place when I am screaming out my pain when I cant let go
Nothing will ever stop me from going to my place
No one will ever see me becuz I will be hiding my face
The walls are black
And I cannot see
I left with nothing to pack
I disapeared from all my memories
Ill never leave my home
Its my place forever
The outside world made my heart stone
Ill never leave, never.
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xdeadxdollyx
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2005-06-03 06:58:47]
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Re: Hiding inside
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by speed-of-sound on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 08:22:12 AM AEST
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| very good. it creates a sad, beautiful image for me. i sometimes feel like this.. and even in the darkest times, i know the place to hide is always there. |
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Re: Hiding inside
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:28:54 AM AEST
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It's sad but beautiful. When you hide in the night of your anger you have to learn to find a light or you'll never leave never.
jen |
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