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A chance
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 05:29:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Yew walk past me in the hall
and all i can do is pause and glance.
Everytime i try to talk to yew,
yew walk away.
So lately, i havent been thinking bout yew at all .
ive already realised your not gonna light up mi day. Yew leave me crying here,
thinking to myself,
were we meant to be at all,
and why wont yew just give me a chance.
i wanna tell yew my feelings, but i dont kno how.
So ill leave it at this:
When we first met i realized the truth,
yew lit up mi eyes, yew made me stare,
and when i wanted yew there
yew were ,
but yew were there got other reasons then i hoped.
Yew were there as mi friend , not as more, like i'd dreamed.
Yew may be the only guy who truly understands me.
i want our friendship to grow into more.
but until that happens, {which might be never},
I will carry along with sorrow, sadness and darkness.
just knowing yew will never be mine, urts to thinkn bout,
its the hardest thing ive ever had to overcome.
I love yew Chris!!
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Re: A chance
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by Sinned on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 08:09:17 AM AEST
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poetrygirl1991
Wherever he moves let him know you want to stay in touch.
It is hard when you care for someone and they move.
I wish the best for you.
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Re: A chance
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 08:17:37 PM AEST
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hey chrissy
dat poem was really beautiful n sad I'm sowwie ur fwend is moving away -hug- I know how hard that is. Good Poem!! Keep Writing -k- I'll look at more of ur poem's later. Pls check out sum of mine:)
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Re: A chance
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:53:22 PM AEST
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Hey, long time since i've been on this site. Great poem I can feel everything that you have for chris. It's kinda like when Corey moved it's like wow your really not going to give me a chance? I know exactly how you feel. It's just weird cause first I tell you about corey and how he left and then now Chris leaves and leaves knowing that you care for him. That's just like me and Corey. Well I hope he realizes that you are a special girl and that he should give you a chance. With all my hopes and dreams of you getting your chance.
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