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A second glance
Contributed by
Ecly
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:26:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I feel it drift away from me every day,
A mess of sand and broken glass
and failing thoughts that never fail to stray.
I lose myself in the darkness of thought,
repressed emotion of hatred and love,
of kindness and disgust for the mirrored face.
I dance along the edges of my mind,
A waltz of broken words and failure,
A line between love and life and total loss
But loss in love is the absence of life,
And absence of life leaves little room for love,
A line that I walk, between living love and losing life.
A line that grows thinner every day.
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Ecly
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2005-06-03 03:26:05]
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Re: A second glance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Row on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:41:59 AM AEST
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| hey this is real good. It flows nicely, and expresses what your expressing well. |
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Re: A second glance
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:38:54 AM AEST
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Pleased that I read this..
3rd stanza was best for me..
nice metaphor there:
(a waltz on the mind.. love and life..ect.)
well written.
B
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