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what is a cut
Contributed by
jtkzlimz
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 12:47:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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what is a cut?
an easy way to solve a problem or a lie we tell are selves
what is a cut?
a secret that we try to hide that eats us away in side
what is a cut?
painful stories scars that tell are pains history
what is a cut i'de like to know how something so bad could feel so good
a deadly secret, a lie we tell them when they see knew scars on our arms
an easy way to solve are problems by tearing at are skin,
our emotions kept within and releasing the tears we havent cryed
what is a cut?
a cut is a lie because we want to die and are scared to admitt
a cut is a sin thats kept within and your probably wondering why.
a cut is an exuse its just a slow and painless suicide
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Re: what is a cut
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:12:05 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: what is a cut
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by heartquake on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:34:03 AM AEST
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| good write... i have a thing for suicidal poetry... it puts more emotions in words than anything else because its an 'end of the line' type of writing... but to me it didn't sound like this was a poem about killing yourself but one of stopping it before it happens which is great... good write keep 'em coming... |
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Re: what is a cut
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 05:22:18 AM AEST
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I like a poem I can relate to. And yes a cut is all of those things a more...if I only I didn't know so well.
Good job. |
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Re: what is a cut
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by axeman on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 12:07:49 AM AEST
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| very good poem. anyone who has felt the warm touch of a razor can easily relate to this poem. |
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