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Genesis And Beyond
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:58:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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'Twas when the world was in it's prime
when stars had just begun..
the age of glory.. young in time
foretold His coming by the Sun.
When in the light of Nature's dawn
rejoicing men and angels met
within a mighty timeless yawn..
for Heaven's Curtain opened yet!
So Earth lay closer to the skies
than in these days of crime and woe..
and mortals saw.. without surprise
the glow of good on them below.
Alas! Benevolence abstained
from all the mornings of the Earth
and sadder still.. the fatal stain
that darkened all of Heaven's Birth.
...an evening.. in that time of doom
on Highest Hill where hung the ray
of sunset, where in Heaven's bloom
three nobel youths in slumber lay..
and as they woke from all of time
in furthest sky where daylight whirled..
on golden wing and grand sublime
they traveled to our distant world.
These nymphs of light, like water played
in motes of time around the Lord ..
and blest our moments, night and day
in echo of His Holy Word!
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Man_On_High
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by tifrob on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 12:13:09 AM AEST
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Very Good. I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by poet70 on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:02:04 AM AEST
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Worded very good, and wisely, good write.
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:02:39 AM AEST
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Worded very good, and wisely, good write.
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:17:22 AM AEST
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A magnificent peice, very comforting, even if i
ain't religious, i enjoyed reading, good work
as always . . .
Benedetto John Papa Sr.
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 02:06:04 PM AEST
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Splendid work that touched my soul.
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:12:35 PM AEST
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Well crafted words, these. Good work, my friend.
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by Masked_Man on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 08:04:47 PM AEST
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This write is absolutely amazing..
written in a delicate manner that reminds me of artists of an age long past..
very very well written Man On High
MM |
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by nanb294eva on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 03:01:38 AM AEST
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Billy
YOUR MY ANGEL since the day we met......... I am so happy we found each other again
I read what you write and cry but HAPPY TEARS everything is so nice it belongs on a plaque like a poem on a plaque or in a book your the best
love nancy
BILLY I LOVE YOU! I DON'T THINK I TELL YOU ENOUGH SO FOR THE WHOLE WORD TO KNOW I LOVE YOU SO MUCH |
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 03:50:03 AM AEST
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| Amazing write.......wow |
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by wizard on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:30:48 PM AEST
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an amazing tale of grandeur that could truly move the darkest soul.
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Re: Genesis And Beyond
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 08:12:47 PM AEST
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Hey B~
I went back through ur amazing poetry and realized that the quality of remarkable work has not changed, but the talented poet behind these beautiful masterpieces has. He has reached incredible heights. One thing I know and can vouch for is that you have earned your way to the top dearest Billy~
Not once have I visited your pages and found myself disappointed with their contents.
You have always had it in you my dear friend.
You weave ur magic through ur pen and into our hearts. Be proud of what you have achieved and what you can still achieve dearest Billy~
A divine write, thanks for sharing your work with us.
with love from ur devoted fan/friend,
sue m |
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