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Waiting for a song
Contributed by
kyarn
on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:34:15 PM in AEST
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The tune I sing softly,
I’ve never forgotten over the years
Never forgotten the four lines I know
Four lines alone,
Chorus and keystone
To my youth, my childhood
A song of mourning
In my mother’s name
I learned while young
I sung as a child
The four lines I knew
Which I never forgot
The song of truth
Triggering vivid memories
I still sing them
Though I can’t remember the rest
Of the song that I never learned
But meant so much to me.
Mother, Grandmother.
I still sing softly,
Hoping one day to hear the song again.
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kyarn
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Re: Waiting for a song
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:50:57 PM AEST
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What a tender, magical write...
etched with memory, maturity and depth.
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Re: Waiting for a song
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by venkat on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:36:20 AM AEST
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God bless..it is beautifully touching the heart.
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Re: Waiting for a song
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:12:52 AM AEST
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Stunning,
heartwrenching,
full of dignity and respect,
beautiful.
it gave me shivers. Powerful theme, strong delivery. bravo.
Spike
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Re: Waiting for a song
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by Dri on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:39:45 PM AEST
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| beautiful. your writing just gets better and better. i can almost see it. |
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