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i'll see you in our dreams
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:14:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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where would you like to go tonight
in our dreams I mean
would you like to old hands
and walk by a stream,
or lay on the beach
and watch the sunset in your eyes
or dance in the rain
facing the skies,
or maybe a picnic
in a park somewhere
shaping clouds
with no worries or cares,
so where will we go my love
we can go anywhere near or far
when we were together i was breathless
and now you are
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Re: i'll see you in our dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:21:39 PM AEST (User
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Thank you for sharing this... It is lovely..
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Re: i'll see you in our dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:58:50 PM AEST (User
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Bitter sweet..
"shaping clouds"...
I really loved that line..
and the rest as well..
B |
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Re: i'll see you in our dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:25:22 PM AEST (User
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This is a truly splendid write. They may leave this earlhly plain, but they never leave our hearts or memories.
Rita |
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Re: i'll see you in our dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by 15andcounting on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:55:38 PM AEST (User
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I really like this poem...the topic is pretty unique and the subtle way you presented it is nice. The last line is really dynamic. |
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