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To A Husband To Be

Contributed by breakaway2feel on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:12:10 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I gave you my heart and poured to you my soul in return of your lust I am broken and torn, I am lost and confused how this game you played far...a wife soon to be or just another forsaken heart. Foolish I was for you played me 4 times and the 5th was a joke I just couldnt realize, congradulate you I must for now I can see what an idiot I am for lost in you I must be. On to you I did give my most vaulable gift, what you wanted all along, the prize that you work so hard to get. And amazed I sure am for your still by my side, why cant you just leave, why cant I just die, I have nothing else to offer you have nothing left to take. You are killing my slowly with every lie that you make, and I'm still lost in your eyes and trapped in your soul, what women fear most is when they cant seem to let go... And love you I still do with all that is left, by the time that I'm free is when to the world I am dead.

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Re: To A Husband To Be (User Rating: 1 )
by 15andcounting on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:53:34 PM AEST
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I think this poem is very unique and interesting, but I think it needs to be in the form of a poem.

Re: To A Husband To Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 03:01:38 AM AEST
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this is so sad and yeah you are right that
is a man for you.. nice poem

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